I strongly believe that Spike did the wrong thing leaving Bubba because Bubba was scared.
With out a doubt Bubba had changed since Spike had left.
In addition first Bubba was scared but as soon as Spike got back Bubba is aggressive.
Furthermore Bubba is now all aggressive and has definitely changed.
Never the less other people would think that it is OK for spike to have left Bubba on his own to get Bubba another pair of shorts at the dangerous water tower.
To summarise I alone think that Spike should not have left Bubba alone at the dangerous water tower because he could have hurt himself and rapidly changed.
Tuesday, 14 October 2008
Sunday, 5 October 2008
A Very Dangerous Situation
We have used the experience of solving a mystery to create our own writing....
It was war time. I, Patrick Van Slown am a soldier. A German bomb hit my life - long friend's tank. No - one else survived. Nothing. Nothing except the metal parts of the tank and the bomb shell. I feel so very, very sad.
I tried to walk but it was no use I dragged my body along, limping. Suddenly I saw a plane flying over me I closed my eyes, wishing I was somewhere else, I was sure it was going to be an attack!! It flew straight over. Opening my eyes, I stared into the sky.
Strangely, I recognised the type of plane. It was the type that Professor Potter was building. The next thing I knew there was a tank driving towards me - I was doomed this time!!! Immediately Neil, another friend, dived and held me under the tank. Phew.
We got back up and helped me up to the cliff for shelter to recover. Hesitant, I turned and saw a giant insect. I was hallucinating. Desperate, I ran to Neil and helped him to attack.
It was war time. I, Patrick Van Slown am a soldier. A German bomb hit my life - long friend's tank. No - one else survived. Nothing. Nothing except the metal parts of the tank and the bomb shell. I feel so very, very sad.
I tried to walk but it was no use I dragged my body along, limping. Suddenly I saw a plane flying over me I closed my eyes, wishing I was somewhere else, I was sure it was going to be an attack!! It flew straight over. Opening my eyes, I stared into the sky.
Strangely, I recognised the type of plane. It was the type that Professor Potter was building. The next thing I knew there was a tank driving towards me - I was doomed this time!!! Immediately Neil, another friend, dived and held me under the tank. Phew.
We got back up and helped me up to the cliff for shelter to recover. Hesitant, I turned and saw a giant insect. I was hallucinating. Desperate, I ran to Neil and helped him to attack.
Thursday, 2 October 2008
the case
Today we have been discovering evidence on when bubba and spike always used to go up to the water tower.
We have also had a visit from bubbas mother for an interview about bubba and her.
We have been discovering picture evidence too.
We have also been discovering why bubba disappeared.
We have been writing captions to find out what he might have done at the water tower.
We have also had a visit from bubbas mother for an interview about bubba and her.
We have been discovering picture evidence too.
We have also been discovering why bubba disappeared.
We have been writing captions to find out what he might have done at the water tower.
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